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Vesna by Ludifico

:iconcherrytokyo:
I think you're off to a good start.
Try controlling your color temperatures more. Trees in particular tend to be more warm where the light source touches the leaves. So the browns mixed with a touch of the green you're already using at the top, and more green maybe mixed with a violet mix at the bottom. The background's tree color might need a warm glaze because the colors match the foreground. Makes depth perception hard to read. To make this seem more alive, there needs to be a more established light source.
Just a bit more to go! :3
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:iconludifico:
Ludifico Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your crit. This picture looks a lil better in reality, my scanner sucks ^^;
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:iconcherrytokyo:
CherryTokyo Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Don't doubt yourself. Just beat the paint into submission :3
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